Friday, 27 September 2019
Cyclone Bola
The aggressive storm swirling violently.
A strong wind circling forcefully.
The navy-blue sky hiding quickly.
These fluffy clouds disappearing eventually.
The small eye controlling loudly.
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Hi Cassy
ReplyDeleteMy favorite one is the navy-blue sky hiding quickly I like it because it explains what the storm is doing, and what it looks like.
I think that next time you could maybe make then a little longer.
I like how you did not use the same word to start all of your sentences
Well done Cassy
Annabelle